Here's the second:
And the third:
Sorry if this is wrong spot, I'm only a newbie here after all...
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I've recently started a Starfox sprite comic, so here's the first three comics. I hope you all like them, as they took me quite awhile to make. Oh, and Erekiburu is my username at The Forest Haven(and here!) It's a new Pokemon's name in Japanese. ^^
Here's the second:
And the third:
Sorry if this is wrong spot, I'm only a newbie here after all...
Here's the second:
And the third:
Sorry if this is wrong spot, I'm only a newbie here after all...
Well I can see the pictures because of the restrictions in effect on network but I'm pretty sure they are good. 
I really think I could have done better. They're kinda rushed. 
They could use some form of a background. The text for speech is alright but you might want to look into other texts for sound effects or for "FIN" like Impacted.
Something along that lines. =P
Something along that lines. =P
Someone made a backdrop for it, I just forgot to save it.
Kronik, Kronik, still using the same red text? I thought you would've changed it by last year.
Kronik, Kronik, still using the same red text? I thought you would've changed it by last year.
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