Universe protector
in the year 3021 earth will be swallowed in darkness and the people of Areth, earths sister, will be enslaved by the creatures of hell and their leader Kikai and his son Jiro. a girl named AKira Kanbara born of a demon mother and a demi-human father as to travel back in time, before earth was swallowed in darkness to reclaim Earth and to save her world. along side her are the 14 humans of Akita, japan, with these friends and family she wil bring back the beauty of earth and areth. but will she beable to save both worlds and herself?

I think you posted on the wrong segment of the forum. Lol.

This should be in the writing and literature.

Lance.

Is this describing an already existing manga story, or are you writing your own? In that case it should go in the writing and literature forum.

no its not its my own story.
thanks ill remember that when i post up the first 4 cnapters


ok thanks

Uh huh... before you even attempt to write a "book" you should get yourself some readable grammar. And unless you're Japanese, and come from Japan, you should really not overdo the whole Japanese thing. Considering it says From: Nebraska...

but its set in japan and not all the human characters are from japan

So. Have you ever been to Japan? If not, setting it there is probably not a good idea.

ive never been there but i love Japan and the stuff that came from there.