Been a long time since I wrote a poetry. Hehe. Comments are welcomed. Hope you enjoy this little piece.

Euphoria

Blood cleansed the filth of my cleaver,
As it sunk into the back of your skull.
Mercy I gave shall be enough for you,
As your life ends with the tune of my growl.

Crackling of your bones
While I frantically sever your limbs apart,
Savoring the taste of rotting iron,
While your blood squirts onto the edge of my mouth.

Sinking my teeth into the flesh of your arm,
Clenching it as I hastily saw off the rest.
I can still taste of your cold putrid sweat,
Aroused by the raunchy stench of this mess.

Giggled I did, as every inch of my skin tingled
Pleased by the pleasurable sensation of the euphoria.
Wriggled she did, as I approach your terrified girl,
I tossed your still spouting head in front of her.

Took out the felt marker in my pocket,
Leave down the mark as I scribble on her forehead.
Kissed on her cheeks and I grinned,
Saying, “AND YOU ARE NEXT NUMBER 56!”

This is probably one of your best as far as description goes. It was colorful, in all meanings of the word. I really liked the last line though, don't know why. I just liked the rhyme you made with it.

It's a bit of a morbid poem overall (and though it's a person, you almost describe him as a werewolf (or something beast-like) while he kills, so that sort of enhances the point that he's a tad insane -or at least to me he is. xD.).

Good to see something new from you, Dookie. Nice work with it. ^^.

Lawl, you are still not over with the werewolf hype? xD

that was so long ago lol.

Anyway, haha, just suddenly felt of writing something violent so yeah.

I was intending to use "Machete" then "Cleaver" but yeah Lol... its not easy to rhyme Machete.

But yeah. Was trying to get the intense "insaness" out of the killer. Glad to hear that you like it.

I Might! Just write something about wolves just as I get some ideas =p

For those who doesn't know what does "Number 56" means, it means the killer murdered 55 victims already =p

Sorry. xD. I think I probably have mentioned "wolf" or "dog" in each poem topic of yours since then. Next time I'll just say "beast", and we won't know the difference. =P.

But yeah, I did like this one. ^^.